~ She's All To Me ~
In those moments where I glimpse her light
Her mind so carefully at work
Discerning what she sees in me
I cannot help but hurt
For, she gives so constantly
That she's forgotten to treat herself
To give to herself freely
Instead she just gives it all to me
In the little time we spend together
On our computer screens...
Her beauty sails through the universe
Breaches walls that stand so tall
Tears down barriers from the multiverse
And makes me feel beyond enthralled
After all, she's all to me
And I mean that she's my Christmas tree
A place I can go where no one sees
That I'm the one who leaves a gift
A gift of love that doesn't come from me
But makes me happy to know that she
Feels loved from far beyond the seas
Because she needs to know she's loved
Even if it doesn't come from me
Even if, I'm her inconsistency
After all,
She's all to me...
Tony Taylor
* This morning
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I wish I could see myself through your eyes dear T. For you have a wonderful heart. There is something precious about this poem. Treasured time so perfectly inked. Those fleeting moments which skip the heart into a delightful dance. I must agree with our lovely Charlotte...the Christmas tree adds emphases on the magical feeling and most treasured sensation that is intimately ours to keep. A gift so to speak. Thank you love for finding such beauty between us π xx Β
YAY!!....so glad you liked it....I definitely had my doubts because of the VERY simplistic use of language here......You are so easy to write for love......just have to follow the light.....and I can find you there!!......thanx so much this G!!.......your words lift my spirits every day........tons of love!!......T xoΒ : )
great ink Tony
Thanx so much DARKLY!!......smiles.....T xoΒ :Β )
great write Tony!..............................................................................Jim
Thank you JIM!!......smiles....T xoΒ : )
nicely written Linda
SMILES!!.....thank you......T xoΒ :Β )
well written! I felt every word as I read tears came to my eyes as they do anytime I read great words! π€π€
WOW!!....thank you so, so, so, much DEB!!....that's such a wonderful comment....certainly a beautiful measure of a love poem!!....you're pretty groovy dear poet sister!!....thanx again for the "Way Kind" words!!......Glide on Love!!.......T xoΒ :Β )
Yeah write, this is what that love thing is all about .......... Enjoy be happy and fly with it my man .............................................. Peace, Luv nΒ π smilingΒ π's to ya π buddy.................................Β πN :)
LOL!!....thanks NEVILLE!!....for making me smile....and for going the extra mile brother.....the Rockets were a very nice touch!!.....lots of smiles.....T xoΒ :Β )
Hi Tony,
Nice one!
Love,
Terry
xoxo :)
Ahh Tony, this is so sweet... distance can really help develop a trust and understanding between two different worlds especially when you have the gift of poetry to really express and understand each other.Β
this was so lovley and I wish you both the bestΒ
Lorna x