Poem -
Shimmering
Dark Veil
Distant shimmer.
Dark shimmeringÂ
veil.
Barely
discernible.
Distant,Â
dark.
Distant dark
fog slowly
approaching.
Slowly enlarging.
Slow darkening.
Ever present.
Encroaching.
More visible.
Always more
visible.
Arrival.
Shimmering
dark veil.
Arrival.
Slowly envelopes
Slowly absorbs.
Moving through,
past fades.
Fades to
nothingness.
Fades
to black.
Behind
no more.
Moving through
dark
shimmering.
Dark veil.
What was
is
no more.
What’s new
arrives!
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Comments
I Love it JOHN!!......the repetition of the word 'Dark'.... running throughout this piece.....works beautifully to create a VERY powerful overall ambience to the totality of this write!!.......No surprise though.....I ALWAYS enjoy your stuff!!.....ALL STARS!!.......well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo : )
Ps. I tried to leave stars but was unable to get it to click : (Â
Thank you Tony.
Love the fast pace John....trying to capture that very real presence/energy/ force all around us that cannot be pinned down but is felt in the soul...?
Thank you Marion.
I love the way all of your words build upon each other and reinforce the message. So very very clever. Another amazing write John! All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
Thank you kindly