Poem -
Shivers...
You walk
Into a dark room
You feel
An extra presence
There with you
Breathing down
The back of your spine
It's looking right into your eyes
A light appears and...
You release your fears!
Breathe....
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Comments
Hey WAYNE!!..... what's so compelling about this write is the way you build tension with your phrasing...... succinctly powerful word choices!!...... that build to the point of ~ "Breathe!"..... ALL STARS!!..... high fives my friend!!...... well done!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴♥♥??
Thank you Tony! That's what my image was, I wanted to feel like I was that person in the room feeling more fearful the more I thought ??Â
I am always so full of admiration for any poet who can create a powerful emotion in so few words! That is exactly what you have done here Wayne..great phrasing and perfect pace- love it!
Lodigiana xx
Thanks so much Lodigiana! Always appreciate your supportive words ? xÂ