Poem -

Shooting Stars

sometimes and,
often to my deepest darkest
shame
I aim and shoot the stars down
from that very special plane
where they twinkle in the loveliest
night
set in wondrous moulds
yet sometimes and, for me at
least,
all that beauty just feels cold
and fake

M P 24/10/21

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Gwendoline

Hello lovely, there is a real sense of hollowness in this write. We can just feel empty inside and out. Everything feels pointless. A powerful short 
hugs ❤ 

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Marion

Hiya...just catching up a little ...been caught up a little lately, I will catch up.on emails later and pm you Gwen, I.hope you are ok love Xxx ( ps...right in your evaluation and thanks for taking the time love) x

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Gwendoline

All good lovely, take your time and massive hugs to you ❤ xx

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Tony Taylor

I will echo the hollowness conveyed!!.......it is amazing to me ~ the sheer honesty.....the ability to be so in touch with one's own inner workings!!.....ALL STARS!!.......you're a shooting star my friend!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Marion

Bless you Tony..thankyou..x

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