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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Break-up's are usual; Break-even-points are few. Thanks for sharing

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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FireChild15

I agree you and Williamsji Maveli. Break ups are weird, intangible happenings that occur, and we've nothing left to do except forget them or hold onto the memories that they left behind. Nice little write. You've managed to make something like a breakup sound quirky (: 

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Airjay77

Thank you for your comments! ^-^

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