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Sunrise by Vincent Van Gogh
As evening sun lays his head
onto springtime’s frosty bed
the moon she rises up once more
stars they twinkle, and adorn
a meteor strikes through the sky
lighting up like a firefly
once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-time’s quilt
show-time mother nature’s twist
sun and moon are sky's great gift
of course, they share the same great stage
yet, take in turn and never rift.
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My favourite of yours to date I think Shirley ...utterly charming and I think Van Goch would be truly honoured by these special words which capture the entire atmosphere of his painting for me. Stunning x
Wow, thank you so much dear Marion, actually it's one of kind for me, inspired by some soft readings of Robert Frost, I rarely rhyme but when I do I like it to count, thank you so much for such a gorgeous review. 🌹 So honoured you like it so much. ❤️
love ur poem
Thank you. 🌹
damm youre getting to 600 before me
Thomas3535, I'd say worry about yourself and your own work, I don't even count statistics here or anywhere else 😊 if it winds you up though, I'd advise you to stop reading my work. 😊 As I don't read yours. Ps also my Angel poem, you must have one in the contest too? 😊
thats ok i seldom read your writing too, I do read some but not many, I dont think I placed a poem about angels here, but I delete poems that dont resonate with readers, I like sharing my poems and those that dont appeal to the readers I do delete, so I might of placed an angel poem here
Good morning Thomas3535, I'm talking about (Angel) written by me, the one you tried to sabotage but failed, anyway no matter. See you here or on My Poetic Side, it's funny how you wasn't even a member of that site when you managed to paste Angel from there to here. Anyway I'm not a fan of any type of troll... 🌹
This is what you pasted from My Poetic Side
And when I took the time to say it's actually my poem, you didn't even acknowledge me.
thomas3535 09 May 2024, 03:56
damm its really similar to this poem posted here mypoeticside.com/show-poem-168103 July 6th, 2023 by Teddy.15
And as her wings now spread fiercely
like the magnificent curtains
on an ancient theatre stage
once again
I see her sparkling eyes
as if they were fifteen carat diamonds
her glow so warm
mesmerizing me
humbled by this
my untouchable miracle
as she gently whispers…
I am always with you
and just like that…
she was.
Author: Teddy.15 ( Offline)
Published: July 6th, 2023 01:13
I rest my case. 😊
I actually did not try to sabotage your poem as such I was questioning if it was permitted to be included as a contest entry, previously published poems can not be entered into the contest, I pointed out your poem was published 2023 on another site (thats why i included date and other site) and as such is a previously published poem, and I joined that site to post some poems that I had deleted here, and i doubt sabotage covers any irregularity over questioning of contest rules, if you want to enter previously published poems into the contest thats your decision, I would not myself
for got good morning
and this topic has run its course now i think
My Poem Angel has never been posted here before, and if it has been chosen as a contest entry then I'm very humbled by that. You still didn't explain how a non member of My Poetic Side (you) was able to go there and find a poem of mine posted last year, but it doesn't matter, I've done my own research on it all, I see you have deleted your account that was made two days ago and I know exactly which members commented on Angel at the time on My Poetic Side. I surely hope it's the end of the matter, I would ask you not to come by my work anymore in any form. This has already taken up much of my time. In the future take care of the things you do and say on websites rather than on the other poets.
ps if it makes you feel any better I have never won a competition for my poetry, but if i ever do it will be well deserved, I'm sure of that. 🌹 Goodbye.