Poem -
Silence
Islandā¦ no mankind
Silence is so kind
Peaceā¦ calm realm
Resting under the palm
Ocean wave is shivering
Birds are singing
Iām still restingĀ Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā
No machine noise,
No mankind voice
Present only nature sound
Amenity is warm ground
All alone in no oneās soil
Many people make turmoilĀ
Like Robinson
Iām only son
Iām on no oneās land
Lost islandās sonĀ
Far and wide silent
Weekend passes
In that peace island
Must get back home
Good bye silence
I will soon come
Yet to my new home
Home of silenceā¦
photo credits:Ā http://7-themes.com/6947982-island-holiday.htmlĀ
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Hey Mirhabib!!........I haven't read you before (my loss)..........I love the softness of your silence in this write..........excellent word choices..............and your rhythm and timing is on point..........also enjoyed the reference to Robinson Crusoe (at least I hope that's what you meant, lol!)...........well done ..... 5*sĀ Ā .........smiles............T xo
Thanks Tony. I really glad that you like Silence and that reference goes to surely to Crusoe. Thanks my man
HeyĀ Mirhabib!!! wow this is anĀ absolutelyĀ terrific write. The silence that you portray in it definitely helped me relax as well as the beautiful imagery along with it. I wish I could be living in your poem right now, that would be great :) xox
Sincerely,
Melissa <3
Hi Melissa. Hope you get such place in real life and enjoy. Have fun!