Sing a song of Taj Mahal
Sing a song of Tajmahal
a fine nazm or a ghazal
Of this landmark for lovers
Ah, a lover's edifice
Complete with medieval bowers
It's a Mecca for tourists!Β
Tis sensational, tis exceptional
tis truly a touristy place.
Watch the shimmer of its magnificent marbled dome
Moonlight or sunlight, it glimmers of imperial chrome
It's ironical then
that though Indian-Arabian I am
I haven't yet been to this touristy place
It is truly as they must say, a lover's shrine
a place where hearts duly incline
They find it steamy
I find it dreamy
Oh, I've got to see for myself this touristy place
Each of the marbled minarets
conceal such romantic secrets
for lovers to silently explore
to admire and to adore
A place human lovebirds couldn't ignore.
Ah you've got to visit this touristy place!
Two famed lovers lie in the legendary vault below
and the stream too it has a romantic flow
It's a lovers haven and paradise on earth
Even dead passions there undergo a rebirth
Ah, rekindle my love for you in this touristy place!
Extol I may this awesome imposing edifice
A greed for pure love is perhaps better than avarice
LΓΆng live the legend of Shah jahan and Mumtaz mahal
Long live love and love like a Moghul
so forever we have this monumental grace!
Yeah take me my luv to this touristy place!
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Comments
Nicely penned angelΒ
Warm thanks dear!
Delightfully enticing.
Yayy thanks soo much for the nice words.!
Yayy thanks soo much for the nice words.!
Oh I want to go too!Β A monument of love!Β Nicely penned.,..Enjoyed...Give yourself a hug....
Oh yes warmest thanks , you must go there yay and tell your love to hug you too. Take care.
Well written, makes me want to go on a vacation there
Warmest thanks for comment , yay do plan a trip.
Beautifully penned, it's one of my places to visit before I die, you should send that in to the publishers of tourist magazines and books, brilliant poem.Β
Thanks soo much for review, yes you should visit, the architecture inspires me , it's more for the poetry and to eulogise the beauty of the structure.
Tajmahal is a beautiful monument.
Regards
Baljit
Thanks so much and regards too! The Taj Mahal is a medieval beauty and many times listed of the seven wonders of the world.
I love looking at the Taj Mahal! Β Well done, I loved your poem! Someday I hope to see it.
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Hopefully me too, warm thanks poetess.
I watched a documentary about the building of the Taj Mahal a couple of days ago. It was fascinating.
Great poem. Very much enjoyed.
Take careΒ - SydΒ
Wow nice coincidence, you watched a documentary a few days ago, nice to know,
The Taj is my iPad screen cover. Thanks soo much Syd Β for your lovely comment.
Beautiful journey of loves architecture β€οΈ sounds wonderful
much love to you Deano xo
A treasured monument β€οΈ
Warmest thanks for the loving acknowledgement fellow poetess, yes it's a treasured monument indeed .?
Most welcome β€οΈ
A fine testament to one of the great accomplishment done in the name of Love!!.......I love the loveΒ story behind the Taj Mahal!!.......All STARS!!.... well done dear poet!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?β΄β€
Wow great you know the true love story behind the Taj Mahal, thanks ever soo much and hearty regards..?βΊοΈ
Hello S.zaynab...
I definitely hope you get to go where your heart desires...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Warmest thanks for the comment and sweet wishes fellow poetess.?
Hello, S.zaynab.kamoonpury.
The Taj Mahal sounds like a mystical, magical palace...place, I mean.
I enjoyed the odd, occasional rhyming in this piece--quite unique.
I have never had the pleasure of visiting India but I was offered a job in Dubai.
I declined but now wish I had gone.
Nice writing; keep up the inspired work.
~Dean
I like how you put it, it is mystical, the place, medieval heritage everyone loves to visit yeah.Β
Yeah my rhyme is meandering and odd I guess for following my muse instead of vice versa like professional conventional poets. Must be also due to English not being my mother tongue perhaps.Β
Dubai ah I admire Dubai muchly.
thanks soo much for your feedback and thoughts .
The pleasure was all mine, S.zaynab.kamoonpury.
You are more than welcome.
~Dean
Dear S. zaynab.,
The greatest monument there is
To everlasting love
Is the Palace of the Taj Mahal
Ordained by God's above
.
Shah Jahan lost his Soulmate
At a very early age
And had built this great memorial
Twenty years it took to stage
.
Now people come from far and wide
To feel the love that's in it's air
Two eternal Soulmates lay 'neath them
History's most romantic pair
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Aww I was waiting for this poet, you make this place more entertaining and fun, with a twin matching poem for every poem Wowww how do you do it? Shows and proves you are a greaT real poet at heart?????.
wow you know the romantic history of the place, makes me smile deeply that you thought of two true loves , maybe they read your words for them and smiled from heaven.
thanks soo much and many regards,....
My Dear S.zaynab,
Your beautiful words have brought tears of joy to my heart.
It is so easy for me to create these poetic comments, for I feel the overflowing passion of the poets words, yours, at the top of my list.Β Β
It is a great joy of my life to know you.
Love,
Larry xxx
Aww that's so sweet of you to say and express, you have a great golden heart and your poetic poem comments are an exciting joy for my poetic heart. I really admire men that can shed tears.
Beautiful write. Warm regards.
Thanks a bunch!
I'm officially in love with your poems!
Brilliantly crafted!
Peace and smiles :)