Poem - 29 May 2019, 11:51

Sinner, Most Welcome Guest!

Merrily to mass they go on Sunday mornin'
With dear family they plan to spend the evenin'.
Sadly, youth rarely knocks on God's door,
Count on the old folks, even if they soar.
Forgive me Lord; I've failed You again
Please help me change the way I am!

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Topic:

The Soul

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Ebrahim Alkadi29 May 2019, 13:35

There is always repentance....welcome in Cosmo.

Avy Wolf31 May 2019, 05:57

Repentance, sinning, repentance, sinning, and so on...
Thanks!:)

Tony Taylor29 May 2019, 14:55

I REALLY like this choice in subject matter...... as a debut' piece its quite clever.... making it curious to see/read your next entry...... Because you definitely have a knack for delivering with a fine sense of poetic rhythm & timing!!...... Isn't it interesting that older people are more apt to go to church on Sundays .....I guess it's at that time in life that one begins dealing with their mortality.......ALL STARS!!...... well done dear poet sister.... and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?✴❤

Avy Wolf31 May 2019, 05:58

Thank you for the encouraging words!Much appreciated!:)