Poem - 14 November 2017, 10:06

Slip away

Slip away

It's funny how a hot bath can wipe away all the strain.
Slip down into the water, all the tension has gone.
Your mind can drift off, worries are all gone.
Wishing this feeling could last all night long.
The bubbles popping and the water gently lapping, this is my song.

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sparrowsong14 November 2017, 10:16

Hello Michelle...

Phone off the hook!

A glass of Wine some Candlelight...

Add a little more Bubbles more Hot Water when the water starts to get cold...

Tubby Time!

Please Don't Disturb...

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Great relaxation write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Michelle Jones14 November 2017, 10:17

Lol Ty ?

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