Poem -
Smoke
I get scared being on my own, nowhere I can really call a home, smoke fills my lungs and also the room, just sitting here for hours on end no family to talk to not even a friend, as the days get longer and the nights get shorter, I still sit her alone, there may be people around me but they are just faces I don’t know, I have nowhere else to run or nowhere to go, even from my thoughts I want to disappear I don’t want to live like this I don’t want to live in fear.
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As writers.....I think most of us can truly relate to this subject matter..... This is VERY well conveyed in its rhythm and timing although (in my humble opinion) I do think it would be more effective if it was formatted differently!!...... However, I think you've captured the perfect tone for conveying your intent with some VERY delivered phrasing!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done EVA!!.... and..... in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✴❤
thank you very much, I will take that bit of advice ?
Again I can relate and I’m pretty sure I know exactly what your talking about and ya put it that way I can relateÂ
awesome poem Eva
thank you ?