Smoke Rings

In my mind
sad memories flow
of places so long ago.
Bringing back people I know.
Dark shadows of things
I wish were undone
But long into the night
these memories still come.
Faded pictures of people
and faraway things.
Drift into the air
Like circled smoke rings.
I find an old thought
as a memory floats by.
They are all grey and mellow
bringing tears to my eye
The memory of her
and the sweet love now lost
Is the purple smoke ring
that hurts me the most.
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Jude,
I don't get a chance to get on this site much anymore- so with my limited time, I have to search for a title that intrigues me- Smoke Rings is a delightful surprise (as a find)- but a romantic tragedy. Men of a certain age (like myself)- can appreciate lost love. Very well done- it builds toward its inevitable end. Bravo!