snakes get all the blame

there is venomÂ
Everywhere
snakes get all the blame
sometimes spiders
Mostly snakes
undeserved.
not all green things are nutritious
ask the foxglove
plants can be toxic too
And pens
But snakes get all the blame
ask god
he knowsÂ
M ~
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Yes, there is venom everywhere.Â
I think you have an affinity with water. You have the ocean, you like the rain
and the storm. I think water soothes you.Â
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How'd you know?? My nan always knew to expect me if it was raining lol. Yea...who doesn't love a good storm and roiling seas? Thankyou B... sorry to flood you...trying to catch up x
Marion, you’re so smart and such a great writer. You’re awesome, my friend. Love, M.
Aw it really is lush to have you back
M Z...you're a star đź’•
So very very powerful, makes your reader reflect on every line. Kudos 🌹Â
Thankyou... God I'm flooding you again. Sorry. Just catching up x
That last line! Oooooo (sharp intake of breath) True though!
I love this poem!! There are so many, many dangerous and nasty things on this planet ... and the most dangerous and nastiest of all has to be mankind (talking generally of course) doesn't it? And yet, here's a thing, the Bible clearly states that "God" made man in his own image. That bodes well, then (sarcastic tone here).
The pen, and keyboard these days, can spew forth many poisonous words, I agree.
But, even worse than that, even worse than the fury of Hell is a woman with her knickers in a twist! (Especially if she has a pen).
Your poem, Marion, is just totally, totally brilliant. And what a bite that last line gives!
Love, love, love it ❤️❤️❤️  a quadzillion points awarded. This, if the competition still existed (does it? Im not sure) then this takes first place xx
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Wow... I'm intoxicated with your comment ( ok, maybe the wine lol)Â
yes yes yes to all your thoughts Tina and god? Well he's a conundrum...so fkn alien when he should be here just...
Loving us... thankyou my friend x
I doubt this could possibly be bettered .. it is one of them that packs a real punch because of the honesty and truth it contains .. x