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SOLDIERS

in this garden we stood
our footprints flat 
on the greenest grass
do you remember that?

now that grass is dead,
and you are dead and
i am dead
Whist the garden shed

Still stands up strong
With its roof long gone
And its old wood walls
Still soldier on

M ~
 

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Being Me

It is brutal, life, isn't it?  I am on our local history page where people post amazing  pictures of  a bygone age. Horse and carts  ladies with hats and long dresses whose lives were as every bit vital then as mine is now ...  but the wheel of time rolls on and they are all long forgotten. The nla kind still sings but it is a different blackbird of course.

This poem of yours brings do much tobthe mind. Awesome penning, my friend, awesome xx

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Marion

Tina...it is lush to see you on here....this is just a quick hello...I'm snowed under ...from -0 to 1000 in a month lol...Will explain...Will PM you....hope all OK with you....thanks love xx

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Being Me

Awww...bless you! Look forward to hearing from you but no rush  look after yourself  Xx

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Gwendoline

Hi Marion, what a great write. Life keeps moving, even when we are long gone. Makes you question what purpose does our little lives have in the grand scheme of things. How many lives have played out before us and been forgotten. Sad really…thanks for sharing your work and your wonderful mind x 

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