~ SOLITARY MAN ~
{surfs the falcon}
Sometimes, it is in you,
An inkling,
Where the search begins
Where the emptiness overwhelms...
We are often made to feel
That there exists another chance
Or some new tolling of the bells
Where a separate reality
Can help us redefine
That,
Which we already know
So well...
Can you cover me in cannabis
And smoke my soul
In a Cherokee covered hell
Then roll my imagination
In a magnetic moonglow
Alter my state of consciousness
So the star constellations
Of my inner universe
All align themselves
That I might remain upright
Because
Sometimes my true place
Seems to elude
My ability to comprehend
That
Which so many others
Seem to take for granted.....
Am I a solitary man?
Secluded, within myself?
Destined
To remain forever
The Falcon,
Surfing the thermals,
Ever the observer,
With no safe place
To land?......
Tony Taylor
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wow that covers a lot of territory that's one awesome poem
wow truly amazing Linda
Wow!!...thank you SO much LINDA!!...you are too kind....and I love it!!....thanx for taking the time to read and comment my friend....Hope your day is going swimmingly well!!......Glide on Love!!......T xo ; )
Thanks for reading CHARLOTTE!!....smiles...T xo : )
Absolutely stunning write Tony...one that really eats into all out mortal fears because regardless of life love jobs kids etc etc etc each one of us is utterly alone within the boundaries of our own minds and once we are awakened that one simple fact is completely and utterly terrifying...so there has to be more right? Somewhere out there. Hugs x
YAY!!...I am so happy that this clicked with you MARION.....I too am of the same mind.....when we come to a place of knowing....like this poem suggests....it usually floors us.....confusion....then questioning.....then acceptance....and once we accept that SIMPLE fact...that we ARE ALONE......a magical thing happens to us and we are reborn in our thinking and in our love and appreciation of this gift...this gift that we call LIFE!!...it becomes WAAAYYY more fun and involving....we begin to treat our lives and ourselves as a miracle......each and every one of us is a living miracle......and of course....after that there comes the KNOWING....knowing that there is much, much, more waiting for us after death!!......thanx so much for this.....and apologies for rambling on & on......you and I just have much in common when it comes to "Subject Matter"......stay groovy girlfriend!!......smiles....T xo : )
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Thanx..... : )
really cool write Tony! I hope you don't have to roam alone!.....................Jim
Thanx so much JIM!!.......roaming alone is the only way to go!!......Peace......T xo : )
Great
Hey T, I think Marion really did a good job at covering this piece. I think for many of us there is an inner awareness of the sheer enormity of the universe, of the vastness of existence. I loved the use of the falcon, who you always see hovering alone high above, detached from the lands, just drifting on the breeze...observing. For some of us drift and observe more than others. I love how deep you took the reader here. A fine write dear T. You allow the reader to become aware of how alone we each truly are
Such a fan of your work
Yours
Gwen :) x
βAm I a solitary man?
Secluded, within myself?β
We are all alone in our skulls reaching out the best we can.
Great write Tony.
Thanx tons JP!!.....Miss you brother!!.....Out!!..........T xo : )
Hi Tony, loved this poem, ye ole Saints player. Also, I loved your comment to Marion Price. In fact besides your poem, I am keeping a copy of your response as it lifts me up. Thanks
Thank you Miss REBSTOCK!!....so sorry for the late reply.......sometimes it takes time around here.....love you girlfriend!!.......your invention on the fine line makes for more than grandiose truth here love......Lots of love to you and yours....so glad to know that people like you still exist!!,.....LOTS-O-Love!!!.....;..T xo : )
Wowsers sir T ... I feel like I have just been tasered ... this is BIG .. made me ponder upon the space, vacuums, portals & voids within my own head, let alone elsewhere sir .. even more than is usual for one so inclined .................................................. all the very best of good things, Neville :)
WOW!!...I am so sorry about that comment NEVILLE......it was a VERY bad night......no excuse though....Many, many, apologies brother!!.... : (
Hey Tony it wasnβt nice what you said too
Neville I do hope you apologize and soon okay sir not nice what you said after all he was being nice about what he said about your poem and supporting you
Maybe next time he wonβt
thanx Greg!!....apologies have been made.....thanx for catching that for me!!......later tater......T xo : )