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solvent mind.

I sit amongst the darkness,
Just to hear my breath,
Heart herring against the closest depth,
Echoing silence,
Not Erie thou solvent sooth,
Mindless manner,
No fear thou prove,
Alone away from life,
Light nor famished hair,
Nor follicles entwine,
My silent sanction,
Clarity,
Thy mind.

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Ravindra Kumar

Bearing, ...the concluding lines...extremely beautiful...."Alone away from life, Light nor famished hair, Nor follicles entwine, My silent sanction, Clarity, thy mind."...motley prompting masterful motif,....lovely,...with love...xx Ravindra Kumar xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you sweet ravindra, ones mind must be in thickened darkness away from fragments of light, to rest and rejuvenate adequately, much love to you. Nardine xoxo

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Tony Taylor

Wowee Nardine,  I think you know I have dealt in this dark place for sometime, many times...I have only this to add to lovely comments above mine............You, my friend, have shined a light into it!......sublime......tony xx  5*s ....FAV

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you my dearest friend Tony, indeed sweetheart, i know of your dark place, in so glad you like this write, may it bring you comfort, as to me, much love to you sweetheart, nardine xoxo

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