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Someone Sees

Someone Sees

I hear a voice
I hear a voice
My Looker bring me
To your brain
But master
Sound surrenders
Noise
My Looker have you
Gone insane
But sir the audience
Is watching
Looking through
Our window pane
To see our wheels
In turning motion
What a notion
Semi-sane

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Tony Taylor

Wow Onlooker!!...........your creativity is amazing..........and the way you delivered this .......with a staccato kind of heartbeat and the narrator...........adding to the eeriness...........and the enigmatic ambiance..........this is FANTASTIC my friend............well done      7*s  FAV         ..........Love and Rockets..........T xo

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Curious Onlooker

Thanks a million kin pen...is it catching on yet :)

Thanks brother

CO

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Never Unknown

This poem is astonishing, it truly amazes me that this didn't get promoted. I truly know how it feels to be semi-sane while looking through a "window"

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