Poem -
Something Else Entirely
exactly what it say's on the tin .. but don't try it at home ...
Was it something else entirely, or his life that flashed
before his eyes whilst falling ..
Well maybe it was, but anyway, regardless ..
As he fell, he thought of her one more time
and of their once so perfect
and otherwise, such very uncomplicated lives ..
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Awesome poem
that's awesome Gregg .. many thanks indeed kind sir :)
Firstly my friend, I think you captured that momentary sinking thought of what was once and now can never be, beautifully.
Secondly, I think you should title one of your future books “don’t try these at home” purely because I have noticed this to be a subtitle to a number of your poems of late. I love it 🙃 x
thanks Gwen, not only for visiting these words & leaving your thoughts behind .. but also for sowing a few seeds of thought ..
'Don't Try This at Home'
is now favourite for the title of number eight, should it materialise 🙃 x
love empathy! falling for your writing Neville!............................................Jim
Thank you Jim, you sweet talker you :)
lol! trying not to be that bitter old man!..........................................................Jim