Now that IS a quandary, Neville. Hmmm.... What shall we call a sky with no moon or Sun? 🤔 hmmm.... I take it there would be no stars either as they are also sun's and planets and moon's. I know, we would call it a lid... That is my suggestion. Seriously though, this is a lovely little poem that seems to have dipped its toes into the nursery rhyme zone. I absolutely love this xx
Neville what deep profound thinking in such a little write. You have me pondering intently on these lines my friend. Hmmm I guess without a sun or moon we wouldn’t get to call the sky anything, because we simply wouldn’t exist to do so. I think therefore poetry is indeed more than just a song. Although songs can feel poetic and poems can have rhythm, each can stand alone. Wow your piece has done a little number on me 🙃 I love it
if I made you ponder, I am either more impressed with myself than I ever imagined possible ... or deeply sorry for any inconvenience I may have caused and will happily pay any penalty imposed .................. x
Well...from the dialogue here this must be a question? The sun and moon are irrelevant to the sky really(sort of) the sun being an independent star and the moon being a planet( sort of) caught in earths atmosphere whilst the sky is exactly that...nothing but an atmosphere. Of course all things are interlinked as you pointed out with the words a poem is just a lyric without a tune. Course without the sun I'm not sure if we would see the sky at all...I'm off to ask Brian... my favourite man 🙃🙂😃
Hello Marion,
many thanks for considering my little conundrum .. and providing such a well rounded and reasoned response .. You might just well be write ... maybe .. 🙂 say hi to the man from me wont'cha x
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that's a quandary good write Linda.
Well I never did, so now I'm gonna .. bless you Linda & BIGLY tooly too ..................... N :)
Now that IS a quandary, Neville. Hmmm.... What shall we call a sky with no moon or Sun? 🤔 hmmm.... I take it there would be no stars either as they are also sun's and planets and moon's. I know, we would call it a lid... That is my suggestion. Seriously though, this is a lovely little poem that seems to have dipped its toes into the nursery rhyme zone. I absolutely love this xx
thank you Tina .. you are indeed a star in your very own write :) x
Neville what deep profound thinking in such a little write. You have me pondering intently on these lines my friend. Hmmm I guess without a sun or moon we wouldn’t get to call the sky anything, because we simply wouldn’t exist to do so. I think therefore poetry is indeed more than just a song. Although songs can feel poetic and poems can have rhythm, each can stand alone. Wow your piece has done a little number on me 🙃 I love it
thanks for the thoughts x
if I made you ponder, I am either more impressed with myself than I ever imagined possible ... or deeply sorry for any inconvenience I may have caused and will happily pay any penalty imposed .................. x
Never say sorry for making my cogs turn, I love a good pondering Neville. This was a fun little write that got all of us thinking 🤔 🙃x
Sorry x
What a thought provoking read , so much thought from so few words..... Sunless, moonless, ?..... skyless?
huh , lost on this one .... maybe heaven?
thank you for participating in this little experiment Rob .. your presence is much appreciated sir ............... N
I figured someone had to be the lab rat 🐀 lol
You really are very shrewed aint'cha :)
😂😂, you got me good, I followed the cheese right to that trap.....🧀🐀
Mice one sir ... 🐀
My recent entry inspired by our little ratpack of comments ;)
furry nuff .. I'm gonna submit write now .. :)
Lol :)
Well...from the dialogue here this must be a question? The sun and moon are irrelevant to the sky really(sort of) the sun being an independent star and the moon being a planet( sort of) caught in earths atmosphere whilst the sky is exactly that...nothing but an atmosphere. Of course all things are interlinked as you pointed out with the words a poem is just a lyric without a tune. Course without the sun I'm not sure if we would see the sky at all...I'm off to ask Brian... my favourite man 🙃🙂😃
Hello Marion,
many thanks for considering my little conundrum .. and providing such a well rounded and reasoned response .. You might just well be write ... maybe .. 🙂 say hi to the man from me wont'cha x