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" SOMETIMES SUICIDE...."

" SOMETIMES SUICIDE...."

Sometimes,
My brain's on fire
Sometimes,
My soul's in pain
Sometimes,
My system's sick
Sometimes,
I have no desire
To live....

Tony Taylor   (Chicago)

 

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Great write, a perfect summary of what we all feeling a times. A feeling we all have to chase away.Cheers Tony Taylor.

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Tony Taylor

Oh so true Cleo!!.........thanx so much for this my friend!!...........smiles............T xo

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Magdalena

Such a dark place to find oneself and truly reflected in so few words.  Great work Tony. 

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Tony Taylor

Thanx Magdalena!!.........I appreciate you catching the succinctness.........was a challenge............smiles.........T xo

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mark thomas

How dare u write something so strong i am jealous...i can't write acknowleg comments like u but u know what i mean my man....kool write

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Tony Taylor

LOL!!  ~ Mark you're a pretty cool dude!!...........thanx for making me smile brother...........and for doing such a great job as ambassador this month........well done brother!!............ttyl............T xo

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Valerie Lynn

I wish you didn't feel this way and I feel the same. You are very loved. Let's talk this weekend please!! Much Love to you T!!!!!

Val ❤️ 

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Tony Taylor

Dear Valerie!!.......I know we have SO MUCH in common..........sometimes I feel like you're the only person to understand the illness aspect of my life.........always a pleasure my friend.........look forward to talking to you later tonight!!..........your friend and admirer...........T xo

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Devon La Porte

Yo T, I know this is a vent write your a resilient mind I see it in your words. A very different type of write for you and even in yhe sadness of this piece I still find it to be well written. Head up brother better days will come again.

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Tony Taylor

Hey D!!!.....you hit the nail right on the head!............in EVERY way...........thanx for being cool bro!!..........talk soon!!...........T xo

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Bradford

Hi  t . A great write . Some sadness here but I know that you are a upbeat soul. My prayers are with you . Cheers to you for the write 

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Tony Taylor

Hardrocklover!!!.........I can guess how you know (smiles)..........but you're right I AM generally an upbeat kinda guy...........and a Cowboys fan which I understand you are as well.........hey!.......what can we do? We BOTH have exceptionally good taste!! (lol!)...........thanx for this bro!!...........T xo

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Melissa Caron

Wow, T!!!! I surely can relate and am here if you need me lots of love

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Tony Taylor

Hi Poetic Heart (Melissa)!!.........I really appreciate the kind offer sweet poetess.........been reading some of your stuff lately..........it's great to have you back gracing the pages of Cosmo!!...........smiles..........T xo

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Nardine Sanderson

Right there with ya bro, love you heaps
Just keep swimming.....creating...
.survival....revival.. ❤

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Tony Taylor

Thanx ASHOT!!.........I appreciate your time and understanding my friend............smiles..........T xo

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Georgina Richardson

I can totally relate to this piece!!........... it`s bloody difficult to get through each day sometimes! but just remember that we are all here for you.......... I love you Beasty Boy!!!.....YOU KEEP ME GOING! G xx

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