Poem -
" SOUL OPENING " (a prayer)
I will go to the stream
Near the woods
Remove, my many disguises
For now, this day
I've decided to reveal myself
For the fool I am,
The person I've been,
And pray for understanding,
For it is there,
In my nakedness
That God,
First sent me into this world,
It is how I shall be presented
On judgment day,
And it's the manner in which
I pray & give,
That which will teach me
To drink Love in,
With no disguises
Flesh, alone
And purely,
I will open my soul
To the cosmic
Torture,
I know,
That I deserve.....
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Comments
Laying on to the page an appraisal of your worth is a touching and emotional read. To judge yourself shows that you have reached a stage in this journey where you have learnt from experiences and an examination of the past and the person you have become due to that past feels beneficial.
A piece which displays admirable qualities. Great write !
Best wishes to you. :)
Thanx tons SIR WATERS!!...... what a great observation!!......... to come away with such an insightful comment from this piece........ makes me happy to be a writer!!............ hugs-n-smiles..........T xo
:) Keep up the great work.
Super power write Tony
Thanx so much MARK!!.........always a pleasure brother!!...........peace..........T xo
Hi Tony..... loved this, soul searching , letting god see us for who we are
and maybe for now It is only god we need to reveal ourselves to , at our most
vulnerable I relate to this,Thought provoking for me
Thank you my friend for this one love ..... Debs xo.
YAY!! ~ Thanx DEBS!!.......I love that you said "maybe for now it is only God we need to reveal ourselves to..." ~ I wrestle with that idea a LOT......... so it was "way cool" to hear that from you....... that's why I said YAY!!.........thanx so much for taking time with this!!......... hugs-n-smiles!!..........T xo