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Sounds

Sounds

~ “do”
 
Without sounds
Life would be bare
Not a single bird song
Nature would be scared
 
~ “re”
 
Without sounds
The bells would not ring
The clocks that chime
Would not have a swing
 
~ “mi”
 
Without sounds
Raindrops cannot be heard
Playing in puddles
Would sound absurd
 
~ “fa”
 
Without sounds
Music would be lost
Instruments would not exist
The beats would be squashed
 
~ “so”
 
Without sounds
There would be no voice
Silence all around
There would be no choice
 
~ “la”
 
With sounds
Love blooms in all that lives
Bringing laughter into the world
An energy you just cannot resist
 
~ “ti”
 
Published in 'Ode to Melodies Memories' Anthology by Mckinley Publishing Hub - Jan 2024
 

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Shaun Cronick

Pratibha love your poem and also love the way you turn it around, very nice and cleverly done and a beautiful write again from you.
Reminded me of The Sound Of Music and that is never a bad thing!!!
My favourite musical.
Hope to read more and hope all is well with you my talented friend :)

Shaun xx

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you for reading and your comments Shaun. I actually wrote the verses for a fb themed contest and then edited it slightly for the anthology I submitted to back in 2023.....as I was editing it came to me to add 'do re me' and I knew it would just work. I think of that musical too. I love Julie Andrews. Will be cosmo a bit more regularly from now on. Px

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Shirley Harrison

Utterly true and beautiful, music and sound so very important for all the things most take for granted. I very much enjoyed this creative poem. 🌹 

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Pratibha Savani

Thanks Shirley. I am pleased you enjoyed it. Nice to meet you and look fwd to reading your other writes now that i've come back on. Px

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Greg Etsell

awsome poem
also nice to see
you back you shoud
put this up on trending poets
and pops 

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Pratibha Savani

thanks Greg. Yea I will...its just time!!! I tend to use trending poets more than pop these days. Thanks for reading x

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Marion

A lovely lighthearted and joyfully read P...hugs x

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