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Feeling less inhibited, all this angst exhibited, limited then, that was transition. Flip your perspective, new position.
Rendition refreshing I'm salivating,
The past is gone, I'm regenerating.
Lost in numbers I'm calculating.
Entertaining a new kind of tone,
The future is a whisper unknown.
This reckless body only on loan
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Hey JAMIE!!.....I like the way you play with the aaabbbccc rhyme scheme here...... the drawn out first line to the powerful final phrase ~ "The reckless body only on loan"...... makes for VERY clever food for thought!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet brother!!.... and....... WELCOME to COSMO!!...... LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo
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