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SPARROWSONG'S DANCE ANYWAY

You broke my heart in ten...

You tried to bring me down...

You were loving and kind in the beginning...

Then you did what you said you would never do...

You broke my heart in ten...

Jump, Stomp, and Boogie!

Dance anyway...

Don't feed off the pain...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

I know alot of people going through difficulties at this time...

Thank you for your comment!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Richard Waters

Hug !

A truly emotional read. Your style conveys feelings very well and so communicates suffering with great effect. 

Thoroughly engrossed in your work.

Take care ! Best wishes as always.

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Richard Waters

The ending shows a wish to withstand the heartbreak and that is the sign of a strong character determined not to let anything get the better of them ! Good message !

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Sparrowsong,

Highly positive and entertaining verse, love it, my applause

You broke my heart in ten...

Jump, Stomp, and Boogie!

Dance anyway...

Don't feed off the pain...

Hugs...

Love

Willy

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sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

Thank you for your sweet comment...

Take care!

Best wishes to you too!

:)

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Willy...

Thank you for your support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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