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sPeciAL

I'd hOped i wAs sPeCial
bUt goD saYs i'M noT
hE sAys I'M juSt onE mOre
blAcK sHeeP iN hiS FLocK

I thOUght hE waS crUeL
i saiD So As weLL
hE toLD mE Be caRefuL
oR I'd gO To hEll

I asKeD iF hE loVed mEΒ 
HeΒ  sAid hE woULd stiLL
BuT fiRst I mUSt benDΒ 
aLL mY ThouGhts tO hiS wiLL

i tOld hiM don'T boTHer
I LikeD JeSuS bEst
he lOOked QuiTe aNNoyeD
SaiD thAt I'd FaileD tHe teSt

I tHoughT i waS sPeciaL
iT tuRnS oUt i'm noT
I'm jUst oNe morE shEEp
i'N A FaiRly larGe fLOck

M

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sparrowsong

Hello Marion...

You're blocking the Doorway my special friend...

πŸ˜‚

In or out?

That's what my Dad used to say to me...

​​​​​You can't just stop halfway and stand there...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

S x

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Marion

Lol...yea I can...either I'll be rescued or someone will push me ass over tip out of the way πŸ˜†πŸ˜† thankyou for making me smile S X

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Shirley Harrison

May I chime in and say I love what sparrowsong has said, my mum used to say that too. 🌹 

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John Prophet

We are all the same with respect to where we go and how we get there!
Wonderful write as usual Marion.
John

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Marion

Thankyou John...I hope so ...I really don't want to have to decide where I'll live when I'm.dead πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† x

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Shirley Harrison

Oh yes dearest Marion I'm 100 % drowning in all your replies lol πŸ˜‚ and it's such a pleasure, you know how I get confused with the website so well done and I got your message on another reply so thank you and sorry I have confused myself to find it now 🀣 so very kind of you to even take the time as you are not here on a daily basis, never worry in any case we always catch up ❀️ 🀍 πŸ’™ these are for the England football team on Wednesday and of course for you 🌹

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Marion

Aw thankyou Shirley, you are a star x

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Shaun Cronick

Just bloody good to read Marion from start to finish, however it took me three hours to decipher though.
Like reading Irvine Welsh on acid.Β 
Have to ask you, is this style to reflect an inner voice, for you have, as I recall, done it on some previous ones.Β Β 
So in a nutshell dear Marion...What's it all about Alfie?

AnD huGS tO YoU!!
sHAuN Xx

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Marion

Hi Shaun, well done for persevering 😁
I normally use this style when i'm.being particularly vengefull irreverent and pissed off at god cos I dont care do I...on the other hand I'm hoping he/she/they will.not be able to understand my writing on the days I do believe therefore preserving my place in heaven should there be one. Hope that helps πŸ˜†πŸ˜ and thankyou for your lovely comment x

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Neville

Ah' that might be true, but would you want it any other way and anyway, in my book, to quote L'Oreal .. you are both special and worth it xx

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Marion

Ah thankyou my lovely friend...seeΒ  this is why I've missed you 😊😁 πŸ’•

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Neville

My pleasure as ever and good to hear .. 😊😁 πŸ’•x

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