Poem -

Spring beyond the seelenloch

(art work by myself - the drawing led to the poem)

Spring beyond the seelenloch

I feel the wind on my skin,
cool, just right for me to take wing.

After a deep breath, I let go of the branch,
whirling down towards the
*“seelenloch”* that was the view for
all my life up here…

The Goddess was with me and
I passed through to the other side.

Mountains empty of life under a birdless, sunless
but blue sky
and nomore winds
made me land upon pale grasses
soundless and unmoving.

Yet in me life began to stir
for my plan to bring a spring to the souls beyond our world
came to be.

Now, a hundred years later,
I tower over the side of these stones
none of us alive have ever seen

and when the season turns, a child comes to gather my leaves that fell
to line his matress with memories of
when he was still alive −
he misses his mother, his father, but foremost his cat for
she went to other fields…

It was worth the effort to hold on to
my life…
 

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Shirley Harrison

Wow so very stunning in imagery and theme what a beautiful appreciation for life and for nature. 🌹 

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John Loopstra

Thank you, I really appreciate this, I wS feeling down because of two deaths in the stepfamily, two weeks apart in the same family  (both drugs related I am sorry to say) when I did the drawing. To me the drawing was showing this and then in the bath feeling sorry for the lot of us the poem happened. I have always been fascinated by these stone age "soul doors" so I thought of going through one when still alive because of the lonely tree😎. Again, hanx for liking no 125 on Cosmo🤣😇

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