Poem -
starlings
I saw them squandered
To the west they flew
Rose to the air like the crumbs of
black bread
Chaos perfected
Collectively led
My neck cricked and slanted
Turned up to the sky
and no one to marvel
Except cat and I...
squandered,
M ~
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Simply Beautiful. 💕
And they are aren't they... chaos and collectively led... how did nature manage such a feat. Thanks so much R x
Thanks J...appreciated my friend x
The second stanza, M
Such beautiful poetry dear Marion. 🌹
Thankyou dear lady x
I won't make a murmour .. the starlings took my breath away and said it all on my behalf .. Neville x
Thanks so much Nev x
Bless ya M x
I turn my head and marvel. I marvel how sad & beautifully written this poem is. B
Again thanks so much B and sorry for late reply .. hugs x
A lovely poem! Was it a murmaration, or simply a flock? Simple things are so powerful. Mother nature is simply awesome ... terrifyingly beautiful and beautifully terrifying x
A murmaration. It has got to be the most awesome thing.. thanks love x