Poem -

Stars

Stars

Soft space in a milky sky
I see the night through a deeper 
Minds eye,
My thoughts swirling effortlessly 
Like a lonely space man
And yet I can't stop the whirlpool
Spinning me insane and 
I like the view from empty eyes
As dripping stars fall
But so bright they still blind me
Till I can't see at all.

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Jason Brown

I like the view from empty eyes
As dripping stars fall

An intriguing and elusive image/idea; in a poem festooned with them.

You perfectly capture the sense of wonderment, awe and mystery of the cosmos (pun only slightly intended).

A beautiful work.

J ;)

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