~ STARS ~
Through dark energy, the stuff of life shines
Protrudes through veil
Stars be, intelligent design
Let us, the world aware
Show changing times require, a leap unveiled
Pure truth laid bare
The stars be suns, feeding many lifeforms
Providing food
For DNA's, evolving forms
Let stars open our eyes
To see the thousands of distinctive broods
'neath distant skies
Soon............ UFO's will be but a footnote
From days gone by
As we ride, galactic sailboats
From star-base to star-base
Jumping wormholes, greeting alien allies
Save, the human race
Stars, have ever been an inspiration
A shining hope
An enigma, worth investigation
"To the stars!", our voices cry
Humanity the line,..... our cries try
We few, shall never die
Tony Taylor
* a work in progress
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Aww Brilliant Tony pinned ❤️💙❤️
Why Thank you Miss JILL!!.....I appreciate the continued support dear lady!!......smiles......T xo : )
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Thanx for the vote GREG!!....I appreciate it bro!!.....smiles.....T xo : )
And thank you to you Sir LORRIS!!.....more smiles.....T xo : )
great write Tony...all smiles
The "Science Guy" is more daring this time:
It's a very very distant dream unless the Law of Physics is broken! Let UFO's be UFO's as they seem to come from a different time-space. Actually, I believe, only God can save the human race, because human race itself is a self closed system (as in thermodynamics).
Sorry to disagree YIYAN!!....but the US government has already released records confirming the existence of downed alien craft that they have been reverse engineering since the 1960's.....so we know for a fact that there are aliens....just a matter of 'short time' before it's all announced in the media!!...there are MANY astronauts that have sworn testimony to the fact......the mass public just doesn't believe anything until it's reported on Television....and trust me brother.....that day is fast arriving!!.....thanx for the comment my friend!!.......Peace......T xo : )
It's okay for you to believe what you believe, and I merely state the Law of Physics in my comments :)
"Let UFO's be UFO's as they seem to come from a different time-space." - This doesn't reject the probable alien's visits, but if there were they might had come from a different time-space.
First of all the image magically captured me immediately!! As I love anything to do with the universe. And I knew I was gona enjoy reading this.
Well Tony I absolutely loved it! i love the arrangement with the sentences and sections. Some brilliant lines too...
"as we ride galactic sailboats"!! Just fantastic!
I've watched x files and all sorts of other science fiction shows and films!!
This is so pinned!! It covers space, universe, stars, aliens, wormholes, dark energy, spaceships and wild theories. Love it. Px
Hey PRATIBHA!!....thanx for this....but I have a question for you.....what did you think of the A,B,A,C,B,C rhyme scheme.....with 10, 6, 8, 6, 10, 4 as the syllabic count for the corresponding lines from stanza to stanza....isn't that 'way cool'?....I got it from a poem called "Peace" written at the end of the 1500's by a poet named George Herbert....pretty cool don't ya think?....anyway, I'm still excited about it.....so glad you liked it!!......smiles......talk soon i hope......T xo : )
Hi Tony. I had no idea it was arranged it such a way! Nor have I heard of the poet. How amazing. Tbh I'm still new to poetry rhyme cos I've always written in prose. So all this syllabus counting etc I've not really done and the way you explained the letters ryhme arrangement, that I didnt know it could be explained that way! I am still learning! It's so fascinating though. I had to re look at the poem again from your message!! Experimenting is fun. Keep going. And then I'll learn something new from you again!!
Px💜
love and rockets
Thanks for stopping by CHARLES!!.....it's appreciated kind sir!!....smiles...T xo : )
Very well put Tony..
Thanx JP!!....I appreciate it brother!!....smiles....T xo : )
Hi Tony, love this work and am excited about your comment to Yiyan which I am googling to find out more. While I do not doubt for an instant the existence of other intelligent life forms not of this world, I do think that mankind needs to open up its horizons...the problem with our arrogant species is we measure everything in terms of how it relates to ourselves....ie/ we have arms and heads so they must also etc...if that makes sense....when we have evolved sufficiently we will realise that life does not necessarily have to be made in our mirror image to be called life ....hugs 💕
I SOOO agree MARION!!...we are a VERY arrogant species and while I do agree....I also believe that there ARE those capable of being open minded enough (as you are) and hopefully in a position to be able to represent us well.....I MUST have faith in the idea that there ARE those who will fight (only if necessary) and represent what is right and good in us all!!......I ALWAYS look forward to your impression my friend!!......Thank you!!.....T xo : )
Let us sail away to the final frontier! where can I sign up to embark (or maybe I already did 🛸 My loss for not finding you sooner
Thank you kindly JOHN LOOPSTRA!!
I appreciate the kind words my friend....and for taking the time to find me, read, and comment!!.....It is VERY much appreciated dear poet brother!!....Peace n Stuff!!......smiles.....T xo : )