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~ STARS ~

~ STARS ~

Through dark energy, the stuff of life shines
                Protrudes through veil
             Stars be, intelligent design
                Let us, the world aware
Show changing times require, a leap unveiled
                   Pure truth laid bare

The stars be suns, feeding many lifeforms 
                    Providing food
           For DNA's, evolving forms
             Let stars open our eyes
To see the thousands of distinctive broods
                'neath distant skies

Soon............ UFO's will be but a footnote
                From days gone by
           As we ride, galactic sailboats
             From star-base to star-base
Jumping wormholes, greeting alien allies
              Save, the human race

Stars, have ever been an inspiration
                   A shining hope
         An enigma, worth investigation
          "To the stars!", our voices cry
Humanity the line,..... our  cries try
             We few, shall never die

             Tony Taylor
              * a work in progress

                 

 

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Jill Tait

Aww Brilliant Tony pinned ❤️💙❤️

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Tony Taylor

Why Thank you Miss JILL!!.....I appreciate the continued support dear lady!!......smiles......T xo : )

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Tony Taylor

Thanx for the vote GREG!!....I appreciate it bro!!.....smiles.....T xo  : )

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Tony Taylor

And thank you to you Sir LORRIS!!.....more smiles.....T xo  : )

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Yiyan Han

The "Science Guy" is more daring this time:

As we ride, galactic sailboats
             From star-base to star-base
Jumping wormholes, greeting alien allies
              Save, the human race

It's a very very distant dream unless the Law of Physics is broken! Let UFO's be UFO's as they seem to come from a different time-space. Actually, I believe, only God can save the human race, because human race itself is a self closed system (as in thermodynamics).

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Tony Taylor

Sorry to disagree YIYAN!!....but the US government has already released records confirming the existence of downed alien craft that they have been reverse engineering since the 1960's.....so we know for a fact that there are aliens....just a matter of 'short time' before it's all announced in the media!!...there are MANY astronauts that have sworn testimony to the fact......the mass public just doesn't believe anything until it's reported on Television....and trust me brother.....that day is fast arriving!!.....thanx for the comment my friend!!.......Peace......T xo : )

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Yiyan Han

It's okay for you to believe what you believe, and I merely state the Law of Physics in my comments :)

"Let UFO's be UFO's as they seem to come from a different time-space." - This doesn't reject the probable alien's visits, but if there were they might had come from a different time-space.

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Pratibha Savani

First of all the image magically captured me immediately!! As I love anything to do with the universe. And I knew I was gona enjoy reading this.
Well Tony I absolutely loved it! i love the arrangement with the sentences and sections. Some brilliant lines too...
"as we ride galactic sailboats"!! Just fantastic! 
I've watched x files and all sorts of other science fiction shows and films!!
This is so pinned!! It covers space, universe, stars, aliens, wormholes, dark energy, spaceships and wild theories. Love it. Px

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Tony Taylor

Hey PRATIBHA!!....thanx for this....but I have a question for you.....what did you think of the A,B,A,C,B,C rhyme scheme.....with 10, 6, 8, 6, 10, 4 as the syllabic count for the corresponding lines from stanza to stanza....isn't that 'way cool'?....I got it from a poem called "Peace" written at the end of the 1500's by a poet named George Herbert....pretty cool don't ya think?....anyway, I'm still excited about it.....so glad you liked it!!......smiles......talk soon i hope......T xo : )

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Tony. I had no idea it was arranged it such a way! Nor have I heard of the poet. How amazing. Tbh I'm still new to poetry rhyme cos I've always written in prose. So all this syllabus counting etc I've not really done and the way you explained the letters ryhme arrangement, that I didnt know it could be explained that way! I am still learning! It's so fascinating though. I had to re look at the poem again from your message!! Experimenting is fun. Keep going. And then I'll learn something new from you again!!
Px💜

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Tony Taylor

Thanks for stopping by CHARLES!!.....it's appreciated kind sir!!....smiles...T xo  : )

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Tony Taylor

Thanx JP!!....I appreciate it brother!!....smiles....T xo  : )

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Marion

Hi Tony, love this work and am excited about your comment to Yiyan which I am googling to find out more. While I do not doubt for an instant the existence of other intelligent life forms not of this world, I do think that mankind needs to open up its horizons...the problem with our arrogant species is we measure everything in terms of how it relates to ourselves....ie/ we have arms and heads so they must also etc...if that makes sense....when we have evolved sufficiently we will realise that life does not necessarily have to be made in our mirror image to be called life ....hugs 💕

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Tony Taylor

I SOOO agree MARION!!...we are a VERY arrogant species and while I do agree....I also believe that there ARE those capable of being open minded enough (as you are) and hopefully in a position to be able to represent us well.....I MUST have faith in the idea that there ARE those who will fight (only if necessary) and represent what is right and good in us all!!......I ALWAYS look forward to your impression my friend!!......Thank you!!.....T xo  : )

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John Loopstra

Let us sail away to the final frontier! where can I sign up to embark (or maybe I already did 🛸 My loss for not finding you sooner

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Tony Taylor

Thank you kindly JOHN LOOPSTRA!!
I appreciate the kind words my friend....and for taking the time to find me, read, and comment!!.....It is VERY much appreciated dear poet brother!!....Peace n Stuff!!......smiles.....T xo  : )

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