Poem - 19 July 2021, 17:12

still

in memories
eyes on only eyes of green

for you in still.... its love
for you in ....we loved

as i sit on this sunset rock
of life
where you never seems
to leave
for my heart sighs on moments
....... holding over and over again
as clouds drift upon clouds
to past

i think of you still
for
you never left

for eyes on eyes i see
you....in particles drifting ....still

like the moonlight on a serene scene
you are still in hold of me

to a death of Still.

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The fish of the sea19 July 2021, 17:54

Love your work as always mate, such an intimate tune in this poem. Glad to see you back on Cosmos my friend. Hope you are well

Lorris Morris20 July 2021, 09:45

Thank you....Fish of the Sea

Gwendoline19 July 2021, 21:39

for eyes on eyes i see
you....in particles drifting ....still
like the moonlight on a serene scene
you are still in hold of me
to a death of Still.

stunning imagery. The reader gets a real sense of an eternal love, that lingers within. I loved your choice of image for this piece. The lighthouse searches with its keen eye, perched on its rocky ledge. This I felt reflected your own words beautifully. A lovely poem
Gwen :)

Lorris Morris20 July 2021, 09:46

thank you Gwen...