Poem -
StINgS + tHinGs
makes me laugh
to watch you
give
snakebites
to the pythons
still....
they writhe in pleasure
do they not?
sleepy eyed dances
belly down glances
sex and seduction
dirty learned
eager...
yearned...
makes me laugh
to
watch
from the top of the
pit
the passions
narcistic
with
bliss
then...
watch
them
recoil
from the sting
of the kiss
seems
even pythons
fear their own...
Marion Price (2020)
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Wow Marion! seems aggressive for your style! who or what are you describing?
Lol...I try not to have any style Jim...I like to try and speak in a variety of voices. I have written plenty like this ..buried in the bowels of Cosmo...thanks for taking the time 😊
I really like this one, you worded this perfectly. Great job
lol although I'm with Jim, what were you talking about?
If you like it...that's good enough for me 405. The meaning can be anything you want it to be...😊
Hi Marion. I like this one too. I think you are referring to people and the snakes are a metaphor for all the bad ones.
Px💜
Spot on lovely lady....hugs and thankyou 💕
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No one knows what's in a poet/ess's mind by reading his/her writing - yes it can mean anything readers like to guess - it appears to describe a pair of pythons mating in a natural world.
Female spiders are much better subject for this poem, if you know what I mean ;-)>
Lol...Yiyan...your comment made me laugh...lol..thanks 😆😊
Luv thinkin inside of your brilliant boxes pinned ❤️💕❤️
Thanks love...💕
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Well, I must have a filthy mind because what went through my head when I read it was... oh dear, I'd rather not say lol. But it did make me smile...loads and loads. Cracking write, Marion x
No..carry on with those thoughts...they were in my head too...🤣🤣😆 Thanks love 💕
I was with Pratibha on this, I just hope you weren't referring to me! lol!...Jim
I know you were Jim...lol..😆😆