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Stress age's your body,

"Stress age's your body"
'Breaking moistures respect,
Wrinkled lines increased,
neglect'

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Yasmeen Bano

Dear Nardine Sanderson,

I appreciate your thoughts, WHAT a nice teaching you are providing to the readers???.."Stress age's your body"..'Breaking moistures respect,'..well done! I think in your family either no one faces this stage of life or you provide the same treatments sooner than they becomes old, You don't have any respect for you father even...really its shameful, impossible to swallow me,.."neglected" ,..What?..What is in your hand? ..Just open the fist and see,..it is empty. Sorry to shake your flying soul. Please Don't mind...thank you.

Sincerely Yours,

Yasmeen Bano

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Nardine Sanderson

Here is what i really think, right now at this point, you obviously have a person vendetta, which i think is quite rude, considering you do not personally know me, you have placed a person attack, viciously in these lines
"Sorry to shake your flying soul"

well excuse me if that isn't a personal infliction, i intended no harm or scene, you rudely created one, then in cultural differences offended me again with insincere words
"Please Don't mind...thank you.

Sincerely Yours,

Yasmeen Bano

did you not think to ask if not sure what i was trying to say, maybe a private attack msg would have been more polite, the sarcasm upon your. Words"I appreciate your thoughts, WHAT a nice teaching you are providing to the readers???.."Stress age's your body"..'Breaking moistures respect,'..well done,
who does that any congrats to slam dunk ones head in a basket,
speak only true words, with respect, narcissistic perhaps, I'm not embarrassed about my message here, more so in disgust thanks again kindly for your one view of many.

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Nardine Sanderson

Firstly i was looking at my own face in the mirror, I've aged due to stress of a traumatic breakup with my husband, neglected time with my own care due to being stress has caused lines to indeed appear on my face, nothing to do with being old as my dad is dearest young to me, respect i have , shall not fall upon your thoughts, sincerely Nardine Sanderson, much love to you Yasmeen Bano

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Georgina Richardson

Sweety you don`t have to justify yourself to that woman. You have written a perfectly logical piece about age and what it does to our skin, and believe me I know what I`m talking about on two counts:

1, I`m bloody ancient:

2, I was a skin care consultant for Estee Lauder for years!!

Take no notice of her sweety. I certainly won`t be reading any of her work!!

Love G xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you Georgy girl, your in no way ancient, your beautiful, adore you xoxo

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Georgina Richardson

Aaaww sweety thank you for that beautifully sweet compliment, I adore you too my darling not only because you are a VERRY VERRY TALENTED POET you are also a stunningly beautiful young lady and a shining example to everyone on here and I`m extremely proud of you and also very proud to call you my best friend. Love G xx

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Nardine Sanderson

I'm deeply honoured to be called your best friend, never forget how beautiful & amazing you are Georgy girl, if you do just ask me, i will tell over and over until you believe it, love from my heart to yours sweetheart xx Nardine xoxo

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Georgina Richardson

I have never been more shocked in all my days, Nardine!

I can`t believe what I have just read. Such an obnoxious comment and such a rude, uncooth and ridiculous reaction to a perfectly good piece. Please take no notice of that woman honey, she obviously hasn`t a bloody clue, she`s just whittering on about something that`s obviously way out of her league!!!. She makes the saying `lost in translation` farsical

Ms Bano you should be thoroughly ashamed of yourself for such an uncalled for, insulting and personal attack on Nardine, she has neither harmed nor insulted you. You say "impossible to swallow me!" what on earth are you talking about woman? if you`re going to insult someone! at least make bloody sense girl!!!

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Nardine Sanderson

Aww sweet Georgy girl, thank you precious, love you endlessly xoxo

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Russel James Mackie

I'm not one good on words, heck I have no buisness being a critique on peoples poems.
but what Yamzeen said was upright mean. sure I said stuff that was intended to be nice in the past but came out mean and sarcastic.
but that was unintentional.
what you said yamzeen was straight out mean and uncalled for.
and I'm not going to ramble on any furthur because I for one don't want to do any harm.
sincerely R.J.M.

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