Who do you try to impress, to whom do you confess
aren't you, your own God
Why would you care about me, as long as you can roam free
It all strikes me as odd
This piece may be short but it is filled with so much. It is very powerful indeed. I have read it about five times and each time it brings out a different emotional response.Â
Well done, five stars x
Shaun Conricks account photo is the same one as this poems photo making me believe this poem it is targeted to that poet. Check my followers to see his profileÂ
I would say Heavenly Father see us like you see your grand children, only with more love than we can comprehend.You are right as I believe He " is no respecter of persons".Nice thought provoking write!...................Jim
Hold up. I may take this the wrong way. But isn't that the account photo of Shuan Conrick? Forgive if I'm wrong but I see this as somthing more sinful and targeted than it sounds. Not liking the tone Charles...
So Fish, sorry you think I'm a thief,Â
Sorry,Â
I try to be original writing, photo's don't usually match what I write. I'm still fishing for the perfect match..
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This piece may be short but it is filled with so much. It is very powerful indeed. I have read it about five times and each time it brings out a different emotional response.Â
Well done, five stars x
Shaun Conricks account photo, check my follower list, accident or targeted?
Sorry what?
Shaun Conricks account photo is the same one as this poems photo making me believe this poem it is targeted to that poet. Check my followers to see his profileÂ
i will thank you
 I hear you whispering
yes in my dreams
 words can mean anything
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Odd isn't it
I would say Heavenly Father see us like you see your grand children, only with more love than we can comprehend.You are right as I believe He " is no respecter of persons".Nice thought provoking write!...................Jim
Shaun conricks account photo, accident or targeted?
thanks lad
yes
Hold up. I may take this the wrong way. But isn't that the account photo of Shuan Conrick? Forgive if I'm wrong but I see this as somthing more sinful and targeted than it sounds. Not liking the tone Charles...
fish listen,Â
i wrote a poem,Â
you're worried about a photo, im sorry
its gone, swim on
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It's a fine line indeed....Â
So Fish, sorry you think I'm a thief,Â
Sorry,Â
I try to be original writing, photo's don't usually match what I write. I'm still fishing for the perfect match..