Poem -
stuff LIKE that...
We stumbled
Throughout the fall of it
Mumbled goodbyes to happiness
....stuff like that
Sheltered
Throughout the squall of it
Watched all the raindrops
Steal our tears
....stuff like that
Held onto life rafts
Way off in oceans, far away
From long day's call
Anchored far out where only
daisies
Raised their heads
To catch our fall
...stuff like that
And here we drift
With praying daisies
Begging waves
To take us home
But they just roll and leave us
Stranded
Without a God
And all alone... and,
Stuff like that
M P 22/8/21
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What power these few words give this poem! Very clever writing x
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these fine words are kinda like 'Loreal' .. and damn, I just lost count of the times I tried to hit the pin button ... because they're worth it x
Hi Neville...no.its kind of shit this...doesn't flow...I should edit it etc...sometimes you just need to vent the emotions don't you? right there right away!! Then you never get around to actually making something decent of it lol...thankyou anyway for your kindness...hugs xx
Surely poetry, like any other form of beauty, is in the eye of the beholder .. Still, there's no harm in venting .. hugs reciprocated :) x