Poem -
Subhuman
to the tune by Radiohead, All I Need
Its a plain fact
Ruining all things
Its all terrible
What I do to you
I am all the things
That you always express
I am subhuman
I'm subhuman
In the corner of your thinking
Fouling up your life
I can just die
Leave you with a better choice
Get what you deserve
Something so much more than all this
But I only want you
No one else can be better
I am subhuman
I'm subhuman
In the corner of your thinking
Fouling up your life
I'm all wrong, its all bad
I'm all wrong, its all bad
I'm all wrong, its all bad
I'm done, you're done
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Yessss Stephen i love Radiohead, and i love this, 5*s pal, great job :)
hey man! check out live from the basement! awesome stuff!
thanks for checking me out!
hope you are well!
Will do pal, and im great thanks, hope you are well :)
deliciously dark
fits well the heads
the image chosen is my fav..
I have this in my office
to remind me of the death of life
beautiful write Stephen
thanks so much jai
I admire you my friend, your comments mean a lot!
the scream!!! the first time I saw it, an excitement swelled up in my soul! it is perfection!
thanks again my friend
I read this earlier stephen but was scared to comment as i have an inner battle that i need to say too . and i did before but white rose is remembering all the stuff .the more you write the more it soothes the pain within and i can see that in you and your pieces .and if im wrong ....its still one hell of a piece lol keep em cumin tina x
well said tina!
thank you for the comment! it is difficult! I don't verbally express my self well at all, some people would say I don't at all! so I write to alleviate the overwhelming emotions!
if I can express and relate with others, I seems to help!
thanks again tina
I wish you the best!
Great write Stephen, the structure of this poem read very well and with such intensity! Nice job! Congrats on your nomination! Another vote from me :)
hey there Rachel!
thanks so much for your comment and vote!
hope you are well!
Awesome write!!!!
Deeply moving and intense.
Very thought provoking.
Writing out "your" thoughts and emotions really helps sooth the pain, well, in my case anyway.
Great job! :D