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A Beautiful Glowing Form

 A Beautiful Glowing Form

Its camping night, tonight, with an orange yellow, glowing fire light
The dazzling stars above, glisten with delight, Singers recite, a campfire song, along shoots a meteorite
Throughout, the milky sky, brilliant flames reach way up high, and the sparks fly,we must continue to supply
Wood, to keep the fire alive, in order for the flames to survive, we must revive
The shooting flames, dancing in their rhythmic frames, within each jump of the flames, my fiery emotion exclaims
From within my beating heart, and as they fall depart, I feel my saddened being fall apart
Leaving my flooded soul, as the the fire rages out of control, I beg for God to save my soul
I lost my man, as the flames  continue to die, lacking beauty from where they began, I fear this was in his plan
I told the man I admire, that I no longer desire, to inspire, the flames in our passionate fire
Letting all elegancy forever die, in the darkness I cry, to light I say good bye, I terrify
My own self for throwing, away such a beautiful glowing, form
Causing, a raging, outstaging, storm instead of engaging
In the calm offerings of the sky, refusing a chance to fly saying goodbye instead
As in the waking of tomorrow, I may lift my head, but my insides have bled and my heart is officially dead, so please just shoot me in the head, killing me instead

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Tony Taylor

This is SO good!!.........the flow you maintain here.......by allowing your rhymes to fall within your phrasing like lyrical content is STUNNING!!.........easily my Favorite Poetic Herat write.........    5*s FAV.        .......excellent write..........wish I could give you more than 5 stars.............smokin' grooves sister girl!!............huugs-n-smiles.............T xo

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Melissa Caron

Wow Tony!! I am not even quite sure how to respond to such a kind comment.... The words and emotions just definitely poured  out for me on this write.... over such a silly little mistake we can often come so close to losing near everything important to us.... I definitely wore that crown before this write.... N such an amazing poet as your self would five me more than 5 stars? I truly feel honored..... Hugs xox

Sincerely,
Melissa <3

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Christopher Correia

I'm looking at you so serious right now, soul sister; thinking to myself DAMN! you are so f...g good, your writing just hums....honestly M.  I got pulled into the write from the very first line, such artistry exists in the setting alone, and the story telling and tone are just brilliant; I know you write from the heart and the last three lines are soul breaking; showing how you feel that moment...so good to feel the genuine emotions of a poem, I have the highest respect for your poetic soul...this is great work my sweet friend  

'I told the man I admire, that I no longer desire, to inspire, the flames in our passionate fire'

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Melissa Caron

Awww! Thanks Chris I truly feel honored by this comment. You make my day friend :) oh, the pain felt is so real

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