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suffocate?

The reality sets in Like falling granules of cement To seal my fate Love and bleeding heart To late? Now must i suffocate?

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Jimmy Arnold

 Hello Ms Nardine,(Lil Sis),

More than honored to be the first to comment on this one, Lil Sis and (A.O.M.) No way out without time on hand nor on your side and not only did you utilize air obstructed cement, rather than granulated sand, as your cover of suffication but you utilized inevitability as well, to completely seal that fate...Short but very powerful delivery, in this one Lil Sis....A feeling we all have experienced in our lives, one time are another....Jim

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Nardine Sanderson

Hello my sweet brother Jim, I'm glad in a way you are the first, you always understand what i intend to say, you are indeed spot on , i hate this feeling as I'm sure everyone else does, sometimes i wonder how strong i need to be to get through it, or if its the final shovel of that heavyweight cement to pin me down, i guess the more we suffer, hopefully the stronger we get, well id like to think so anyway, hope your doing well sweetie pie love and well wishes always your Aussie sis nardine xoxo

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tracy marks

that really pretty nardine. writing short thing

is hard for me. i feel like i can relate to suffocating.

maybe just a different kind.

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Nardine Sanderson

I guess your referring to suffocating in love Tracy, again love enlightens you builds you up, helps strengthen your soul, not suffocate and rip you apart , obsession is a deadly thing to mess with, be careful beautiful girl xoxo

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Tina Moore

Love your second and third line -creative in its vision...i know the feeling so your words hit strong ,well wrote and thought :)
                          Tina x

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you Tina, i wish you didn't know that feeling, nor anyone else, you seem like an adoring heart, to kind to be hurt, love to you nardine xoxo

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