Poem -
" SUICIDAL TENDENCIES "
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Dreary thoughts, draping drama
Into the abyss of
Each, and every day
As the dawn dances
And dreariness
Encompasses, my every thought
I recognize this feeling
Depression,
Is on it's way
To deliver this deadly play
Into the bloodied bathtub
Where my aching confidence
Just throbs
And then,
Just
Drains away....
Tony TaylorĀ Ā (Chicago)
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Comments
WOW Tony xx
Excellent write
Top Score and a faveĀ
love itĀ
Jenny x
You're groovy Jenny Brewer!!............thanx for the thumbs up little darlin'!!............hugs-n-smiles............T xo
Seriously dark and bloody;
For those who feel depression
I recommend this website
https://www.beyondblue.org.au/connect-with-others/online-forums/young-people/beating-depression-(-and-anxiety)
And a good dose of Fawly towers!
Now back to the poetry; quite brilliant Tony, 5s and fav!!!!
JAI MASTERS!!......how I adore that name!!.........dude!! you're always BAD in every way..........thanx for the commercial break bro!!(lol!)......but although I Love "Fawlty Towers"..........I can't say I've EVER injected any John CleeseĀ into my stuff...........I thought it was cool with the depression info. man...........you're like an encyclopedia of ALL THINGS.............thanx for this my friend............T xox
Yeah Tony...
GREAT FOR HORROR NIGHT!
Great...
Umm...
EVERYTHING!
Hugz...
Feathers
5* and fav
Hey Feathers!!........I knew you'd LOVE the pic!! (lol!)..........thanx for checking me out sistergirl!!..........smiles..............T xo
Like this alot.....the abyss looked back is how felt on this one.
Hey Mark..........you're pretty jammin' bro!!...........thanx for this............later............T xo
This was perfection, and I mean that quite literally you did a great job from the execution to the conclusion and it seems as though you are adapting a flow that I can really appreciate and respect for its fluidity
Mood 5*, setting 5*, title 5*
CO
Holy Crap ONLOOKER!!.........I think that's the most flattering comment you've ever given me.............I am so taken aback..........I know not what to say ,"Brave Sir Knight!"...........seriously bro.........this was WAY cool man.............truly heartfelt thanx bro!!..............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Nicely penned bro, not a glitch to be seen
Awesome , love ya :) deano xox
Thanx Deano!!.........you're my hero Big Sis!!..............smiles.................T xo
Brilliant piece of writing, I felt drawn into this image of depression and understand it, wonderfully wrote so those who don't suffer depression can maybe understand, I wrote a piece about depression called panic attack but I feel your writing is what I was trying to express.
Paul
Wow Paul Mason!!...........what a great comment!!.........don't think I've ever seen you comment on something of mine before..........I TRULY appreciate it ...........and will look for your write ...........Love and Rockets brother!!.............T xo