Poem -
Suicide
Behold a sight from the highest mountain, scale the corrugated grove-
Cantor your plight through a willowy meadow, submerge in the sea you dove
Come to rest oh sweet laughter, leave this place to carry on
letting go of bitter sadness, come embrace the end of dawn.
Our loved one pondered this wearisome journey, a place where souls con-trite
lost among the thorns and thistles, seeking refuge to end all hurt insight.
Your tormented life grew weakly laden, humbling to fate, you took a chance-
Leaving behind flashes of memories, composing yourself to this viable dance.
May you now be at peace..
With Love,
Sister Kim
I will miss you Mark
still missing you Bobbie
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a beautiful poem sad but with a lot of respect for your brother tina
Thank you Tina he was my best friend
kim shah is right, remembering him through your writing is a great memory to your brother best wishe's
tina
Hi great poem kim lovely write I've had personal experience you fill your best friend with pride x
wow a great poem, such a sad meaning but im sure your friends spirit is around you bubbling with pride that his best friend a such an amazing wordsmith congrats on an amazing poem x
mark x
Hello Kim,
Just as all of the other wonderful people that have given to you, through kind words of wisdom and faith, their heart felt condolences, i to am blown away with the courage you have displayed in writing the heart hurt plight of your brother and friend in this wonderful but very sad poem and all those that spoke with you through their hearts on this site has words of genuine care and concern encrusted in their kind message to you they have opened as though a card of sympathy and compassion.We all have lost someone in life, that we wished could be returned, without any time to have been lost in our lives between us but through Gods divine intentions for us all in life, this isn't to be.Though with you, he remains not only in heart but now in the annals of time through this devotional poem, you have not only recited for him but given to him, the day you wrote it and placed it on the site of Cosmo Funnel and through this site, through the many people it has come to contain and serve, you will feel your brothers presence each moment you open your heart and mind and visit your brother, who will always carry a place, (because of your graces) now in our hearts as well and just as Shah has conveyed, everyone on this site that has been given the privilege, by you, to read of your prided and beloved brother, will forever have a place in our hearts for you and he both,so continue placing what you feel needs to be heard, on this site because we here, will always hear you and will be their for you as much as we can.We all feel what you have wrote and it feels, as William stated, like a whole lot of unwanted pain,which is obvious, and now that you have given us this pain and have released it from your heart, allow yourself to live your life the way your brother would have loved to have seen you live it and accept our prayers, in place of the pain you have expelled and continue feeling good about the times you and he shared together and the many times you truly laughed a loud together and chuckled so low, for this is what he wants of you now and forever....He's home away from home now and he miss you, as much as you he.....But continue to live your life.....
My prayers go out to you and he both,
Jim