Poem -
" SUICIDE ON BROADWAY "
Dreary thoughts
Draping drama,
Into the abyss
Of every,
Staged,
Detail,
As the spotlight
Dims,
And the dreariness
Under-studies
My every cue,
I recognize the feeling
Depression,
It's on my tongue
To sing and dance,
Through Act IV
Scene IV,
Where the curtain begins
Closing,
On the bloody
Bathtub scene,
Where,
My waning confidence
Bleeds out,
And slowly,
Spirals,
Down,
The drain,
Angels
Applaud...
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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You are in good form at present choosing topics and interests to really get your teeth stuck into. Your analytical eye on the world always gives a good read ! You are in touch with emotions and perspectives that lead to enlightening poetry.
Warmest wishes my friend.
:)
Thanx SIR WATERS!!....... your comments mean so much to me brother..........I appreciate your recognizing that I am REALLY trying out many new topics and formatting etc............ warm wishes back at ya brother poet!!............. Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
I enjoyed!!!
Plenty intrigue &
emotion in your poem,
pefect.
Luv Jai :)
Thank you JAI MASTERS!!.........appreciate the intrigue comment very much.......... smiles........T xo
Hi Tony,
My stupidity! A "suicide blonde" could never be Marilyn Monroe, because I think a lot of us know, that she was murdered, by some higher ups we won't talk about now. That being said, I love your poem. It is packed with emotion and illustrates the struggle of a beautiful actress coping with her innermost demons. The only thing that gives me more joy, than reading your comments to me, is reading one of your masterful works of arts. Three cheers, my dear friend.
Peace, Rockets and Love,
xox Larry
LOL!! ~ Thanx so much LARRY!!.......... your comments come from a place of pure honest integrity!!.........thanx for the PM before the comment....... you're a good man.......... and you're doing an AWESOME job as AOM..........best one in months!!........ high fives brother!!........... peace........T xo