Poem -
SUMMER
The light, is so abundant
Children pitch tents in back yards
The outside is now the inside
Pickers out back, in the peach orchard
Baseball's, in full swing
Beer flows at barbecues
Berries being harvested
Bikini's, are in full view
Still, my thoughts remain with you
Gently sweating, as you tan in the sand
And drive-in movies, though they're a quest
Come to me, as memories of heaving breasts
And fumblings in back seats of cars
With music beaming from hot beach bars
Summer's here, time to decide
What we'll do, with our fourth of July.........
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Dear Tony
Good depiction of summer, My love, My five stars
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you so much Mr. M, you chose my favorite part of the poem.....it just sort of spilled out onto the page.......I had fun with this...........old memories.......thanx for recognizing my friend.........tony
Pictorial device with pasted concealed memories ,...musical tone of the work.....cute....I like the motif....good luck friend,...xx Ravindra Kumar xx
Cool Ravindra, it's always great to hear your insights my friend...........thanx...........tony
A lovely summery piece T` I`d love to be there to see how you all celebrate the 4th July it must be great fun sweety. Love G xx
Thanks G, I wish I could take you to a 4th of July celebration, anywhere in the US you can find a party on every block (pretty much).....it's a blast.........unselfish fun...........smiles........T :)
That`s one eck of a long swim for me!! I`d be too chuffin knackered to party, these poor little legs would be worn down to stumps by the time I got to you!!!! By eck I`d be right ready for a pint though our kid!! I tell ya what though!! I won`t be beaten!! I`ll start practicing tonight in the bath!! How`s that eh!! Deal or what??!!! Love you. G xx