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Sun and Star

Sun and Star

Every star may be a sun to someone, 
That warms & nurtures, 
An ever present,
The glow that awakes from stilled obsidian  

An ever present,
An always,
A taken for granted,
Yet the sun rises & sets, & stars remain, 
& time ticks, seconds become hours & years pass

You & I,
sun & star,
An ever present, 
As day melds into night, as light seeps into dark,
As time needs space, 
You & I, 
Sun & star

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RG

Very thought provoking write, i greatly enjoyed the comparisons and parallels 

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Tracey Goundrill

Thank you, Robert. I’m glad you enjoyed it. It would have been Carl Sagan’s 87th birthday today. A man who introduced me, via books & TV, to the wonders of the universe. I wrote this today, it’s about a love story of sorts, not realising it was Carl’s Sagan’s birthday also. I’m hoping he would have enjoyed it too with the references to the universe 🙏😁

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Marion

A lovely write Tracey x

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Yiyan Han

Time and space means the universe that we know, relatively speaking ;)

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Tracey Goundrill

It’s actually a poem about two individuals in a relationship, who have taken each other for granted, needing time..& space ;]

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