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Sun and Star

Sun and Star

Every star may be a sun to someone,Ā 
That warms & nurtures,Ā 
An ever present,
The glow that awakes from stilled obsidianĀ Ā 

An ever present,
An always,
A taken for granted,
Yet the sun rises & sets, & stars remain,Ā 
& time ticks, seconds become hours & years pass

You & I,
sun & star,
An ever present,Ā 
As day melds into night, as light seeps into dark,
As time needs space,Ā 
You & I,Ā 
Sun & star

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RG

Very thought provoking write, i greatly enjoyed the comparisons and parallelsĀ 

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Tracey Goundrill

Thank you, Robert. Iā€™m glad you enjoyed it. It would have been Carl Saganā€™s 87th birthday today. A man who introduced me, via books & TV, to the wonders of the universe. I wrote this today, itā€™s about a love story of sorts, not realising it was Carlā€™s Saganā€™s birthday also. Iā€™m hoping he would have enjoyed it too with the references to the universe šŸ™šŸ˜

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Marion

A lovely write Tracey x

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Yiyan Han

Time and space means the universe that we know, relatively speaking ;)

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Tracey Goundrill

Itā€™s actually a poem about two individuals in a relationship, who have taken each other for granted, needing time..& space ;]

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