Poem -

Sunrise

Sunrise

I used to live in shadow of a threatening monster.

Depression brought me to my knees on occasion !

But my soul took a wondrous path for the better ,

When I found you with your remedic compassion.

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With your blessed hand leading me to true safety,

I suddenly recognised all the sunrise has to offer !

Belief in you shone light through a dark so empty.

You showed it was finally time to no longer suffer !

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sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

Now, you hold the key...

You know how to be an angel to someone in need...

A student who becomes a loving and compassionate teacher...

A great guide to help bring someone into the light...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs!

:)

sparrowsong 

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terry terri ZO

having depression myself understand words -as for my sun thats another story

enjoy reading 

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Richard Waters

Keep battling on and things will get better !

Take care my friend.

Hug.

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Deborah Evans

Hi Richard having suffered with depression 
myself I can relate to your write 
It feels your in  darkness and there is no escape 
but so fantastic when you see the sun again.It is wonderful
when you have someone who loves you help you see that light 
again, I was in a very dark place before i came here to Cosmo 
and just being here was my savior, reading other peoples experiences 
with depression and feeling your not alone, is a great help
Great write  Hug and best wises Debs  
 
 

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Richard Waters

So pleased for you ! Cosmofunnel certainly is a community with spirit to alleviate symptoms of depression.

Hugs !  :)

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Tony Taylor

CONGRATS SIR WATERS!!........ this is absolutely beautiful in every way........ timber, metering, intent, UNDERCURRENT (smiles).......a lovely, shining, write!!........ So happy administration gave you the nod on this one brother poet!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.  ?

 

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Richard Waters

Thank you for your kind words !

Wishing you all the best as always.

Hugs.  :)

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