Poem -
Surfing
Like 6 Pin it 2Waves of thoughtΒ
begging to be surfed
the pen is my board
ΒThoughts break like waves
and just like the surfer...
a missed wave is lost foreverRaise a glass
to the missed waves
that will be forever mourned
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Comments
Hi Syd, I've never surfed, but I love the sea and this resides with me, thoughts into waves that we can lose, really works as a writing analogyΒ
brilliantly done
Lorna
Hi Lorna,
I 've never actually surfed either. I've only tried to metaphorically surf the ideas that come into my head inorder to write. I'm glad you enjoyed the anology and poem. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Much appreciatedΒ - Syd
I've definitely missed those waves Syd, my mind is a flood of stagnant water collecting dead larva.
My only suggestion is to use that to write. I appreciate you stopping by.
Take care GerardΒ - Syd
Perfect...those ideas or thoughts we have whilst driving or dropping off to sleep...not penned ...lost forever...the instant death of a creation before it gets born!!...my glass is raised...Great write x
worth the pin, loved it
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