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Swallows and Starlings

Swallows and Starlings

Millions of starlings I watch them fly, murmurations of movement soaring the sky..swooping so low then rising up high, wonderful wings Oh me oh my..

How on earth do they do this, twisting and twirling..sensationally shape-shifting, weaving and whirling..Just before dusk as the sun sets on the sea, on an early eventide, beautiful birds dance for me..Great gatherings of swallows coiling in complexity, marvelings of masses betwixt intriguing intricacy...

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Jim "The Lad" ....

That pic looks like a ringing bell! I really love the poem and the topic! I wish those were in numbers in the US, I would love to watch them! That is a phenomenon ! and your poems are like the starlings one undulating phenomenon after another! enjoyed! ...................Jim

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Marion

OMG...you are so so.lucky if you get to see these wonderful birds Jill...I could watch them for hours but we don't often catch their amazing displays here ..pinned 💕

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Jill Tait

I do see them luv & what an awwsome sight they really are ❤️❤️❤️

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Jill Tait

Awww I love watching murmurations such magical sights Thank you Jim lad ❤️💙❤️

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The fish of the sea

I actually get a sense of conspiracy from the pic, but I think that's just cause I have watched too many scifi/ philosophical movies. I really like your poem, it's so majestic but simple and really highlights the key messages you were trying to convey. Sorry for sounding wordy, just finished an assignment for Uni lol, best wishes! 

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Pratibha Savani

Max!! You are at uni?!! I didn't realise you were so young!! What are you studying? Anything to do with biology and life in the seas?! Px

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The fish of the sea

XD, yeah, younger than I sound, I'd only say somthing in Engineering (anonymously staying anonymous) , unfortunately chemistry is my downfall so no marine science or biology for me. Thanks for showing interest! Best wishes and kudos to your poem again! Kind regards, TFOTS 

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Jill Tait

Awww I love yours words so Thank you my lovely ❤️💙❤️

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Pratibha Savani

Wow love the portrayal of these birds in your verses. Simply put and elegantly said how beautiful nature is. I dont get to see such an image in the sky in our area. Must be an awesome sight. 
Px💜

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Jill Tait

Murmurations are absolutely awwsome my
lovely ❤️❤️❤️

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