Poem -

Take my hand

Take my hand

If I held out my hand 
would you take it ?
it's warmth ready to permeate your soul,
but what would it tell you of me ?
the scar on my finger, 
the wrinkling skin,
the crooked pinkie,
the gnarl on my thumb,
stories to be told,
if you would only take hold.

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Keith Stubbs

Haydn 
I like this write, I often feel that a person's hands tell a lot about them and you've captured that in this write 
great stuff

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GREG TUCKER

very nice way of taking hold of someone's hand

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Charu Shawd

Beautiful , filled with depth n wisdom 

loved it xx

💕🕊

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