~ TALES FROM THE EVER-WAR ~
Chapter 3: Evil's Eyes
When I, some truth, about me find
I make myself, the fallen angel
Alone, in my loneliness
Do cry out,
As I, cleave off, my own appendage...
In making a mockery, of my own mind's eye
I try not to damage, the hurt I hide
No home, no crime,
No place to go,
Choices haunting me
From my early life...
When I sometimes, do dare deceive
My only truths, destroy my memories
And in that lonely choice's reprieve
I cry myself into sorrows sleep
Knowing my darknesses
Eerie grief...
When I, some cornerstone, of my life
Do turn and burn into saddened sighs
I find, that as time goes by
The blood and gore, does cloud my mind
And makes me pray,
For death's
Most loyal disguise...…
Then, finally I
Have dared surmise
That I am hate, blood curdling fate,
Those choices haunting,
That helped me realize
In one final, cold, compromise
That I,
Am Evil's,
Dead
Pair of eyes....
Tony Taylor
* another fiction from the series in progress
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Wow...you are really making this series gripping reading! In this chapter we see a real turnabout in that it is you and your thoughts which are described and reflected upon. It is also tying the others together with this one really well. This one is deep, Tony, really deep! Exquisite writing that is keeping me enthralled. ???? great writing x
THANK YOU TINA!!....your support on this series has been SO Friggin' STELLAR!!......I'm so happy you liked it....your impressions are important to me......I respect you as a writer.....and truly appreciate your love of poetry in general.......the way you Love poetry is obvious to all of us on COSMO....and so I truly look forward to your comments!!......Thanx for the PIN dear poet sister!!......stay groovy girlfriend!!.......smiles.....T xo : )
Tony, this is multi-layered complex and brilliant. Just gets better and better. Love this series a wonderful write. Thankyou poet brother
Thank you SARFRAZ!!….I appreciate your taking the time to read the series and understand the layering going on......means a lot dear poet brother!!…..LOVE & ROCKETS!!…….T xo : )
Wow Tony the final part still as dark as ever. The imagery of the eyes are striking ? A brilliant write to the series ending makes you think! Looking fwd to your next new fantasy Chronicles!! Px ?
YAY!!...thanx so much C!!….Only you could possibly catch some of the personal references herein......you are TOO cool......keeping it 'close to the vest' like you have....and still commenting so beautifully on the ins and outs of what I'm attempting to convey with these!!…….makes you pretty damn cool in my book!!…..not only that but you have shed light on the most important aspect of my attempt......the fact that this went into 'First Person' for a reason!!…….You're the grooviest!! …...thanx again!!…..Hugs N Kisses!!…...T xo : )
Hi Tony, as you already know...I am never very good at leaving meaningful feedback. I really enjoyed this piece and I'm looking forward to the next.
I can really relate to these words when I'm writing. Sometimes I feel as if I've done my brain some kind of injustice by not coming up with something better...I may be way off here, but that is how those lines relate to me.
Stay safe - Syd xo
Very strong piece of writing! ??
What a finale to a very creative poetic genre. Loved the style, content and imagery which kinda shot me into the world you created for a moment ? can't believe i missed this one.