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Tanka - Tanka

Tanka Tanka means one step at a time .. It is also the name of the psychiatric hospital I volunteer at in West Africa ..

Tanka - Tanka

Tanka - Tanka

The confused
frail and elderly gent was
Dragged from his rattan bed
in the early hours
Then thrown into the back
of a heaving, hungry and
Impatient black ambulance
parked outside the compound
 
This was the result of
having pissed in his
Daughter’s wardrobe on three
consecutive nights and refusing
To eat the fish benachin or
piece of fruit she had previously
Prepared for him with so much love
or so she said ..
 
Several other souls were taken
that night too to Tanka-Tanka
Where each was injected with
strong white man medicine
Which served to wipe out the
syphilitic spirochete and the tiny
HIV virus in one single blow .. 

Until that moment, both pathogens
had fought to control the already
Compromised nervous systems
of their unsuspecting hosts
Three quarters of an hour later
the confused, frail and elderly gent
Was already well and truly dead ..

His daughter and her scheming
husband, together with their
Five children would later inherit
and share between them
The sum total of the old fella’s
grand estate
Which comprised of the following

The old gent’s rattan bed and
rotting mattress, a wooden stool,
A leather bucket, a pink plastic bowl
and a total of twenty five dalasi 
So was it worth it, I asked his daughter
of course she replied
This is Africa my friend …
 
 
 

 

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Marion

Raw, powerful...all the more so for being true. It is already proved that some humans feel nothing at all...I have long thought that these people account for far more of the populations of the world that the occasional psychopath or sociopath that makes the headlines. On the other hand, riches are relative...when I was camping several years ago off the beaten track I would have killed for a bar of chocolate ...Great write x

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Neville

Thank you Marion have a Topic, or Twix on me :) x

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Being Me

Awwww.... I dont know what I find more disturbing, that this old gentleman was poorly through and through, what his daughter did or the fact the material remnants of his whole life was soooo little. But then that's Africa I guess. This whole story makes for a truly engaging poem. And I guess it is probably true? Wow — amazing poem x

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Neville

Good mane to you BM,
thank you for considering these words of mine .. Yes, every single word is true .. it is a brutal place indeed and I have worked there twice before .. The last time for almost six months .. am hoping to return & drive overland in a land-rover or something stuffed with supplies possibly next year .............. x

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