Poem -

Tears

author
Liliana Rodolfo

Crystal clearΒ 
but cloudy too
you really do distort my viewΒ 
coming down oh so fastΒ 
luckily you wont lastΒ 
leaving me here sad and aloneΒ 
you're my tearsΒ 
suddenly goneΒ 

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Total votes: 3
Tags: 
Sad
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
Topic: 
Misery
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Ebrahim Alkadi

i like how you make stop- freezing like the hesitation pulse, this is so brave style and facing the words by feelings.Β 

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