Telephones in the night
Telephones in the night
Awakened from the depths of oblivion.
The professional voice emotionless.
She died a few minutes ago
it was peaceful and sudden.
Alone in the dark I weep.
Feeling insecure
like a small boy again.
A stupid thought comes to me.
Who will take care of me now?
Then I remember her soft lips.
Kissing me on my fevered brow
as a little boy.
The sweet fragrance
that was only hers.
Her face so beautiful to me.
I lay a dark suit on my bed
Accessorized a black tie and white shirt
Black for my mood white for her purity.
How come I did not call her last night?
Just to say thank you.
No much more than thank you
So much more.
I call her number
to hear her voice again.
She ask me to leave a message.
I whisper
I love you mom.
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Comments
Heyy Jude..
Its really awesome...
The lines...
''A stupid thought comes to me.
Who will take care of me now?'' can tell about your pain..!
Touched my heart..:)
Keep Writing!
Regards
Surabhi
Jude, this made my eyes well up as I read it, so nicely written and I liked the concept!! I don't know if this was true to your own experience or something you just composed, but either way I felt it! Writing and poetry, for me, is not just the words or structure you use but how it makes you feel, and I truly felt the emotion A deep heartfelt write, loved the end, great stuff. A 5*s and nom from me.